Offical Critique My Voice Thread

[MsSaneJane]

*Mod please sticky.*
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I decided to start this post to kinda cut down on the random critique my voice threads. Also the thread can be a great way for anyone to listen to the somewhat categorized progress of others.
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Here is the link to most most recent video of my progress. It's really short let me know how I sound. 

[Stephe]

I like! We all can improve and practice but it's passable for sure. Might could use a little more variation in pitch? It's a tad monotone and work on using pitch for emphasis, not volume. Guys use added volume for emphasis, women raise their pitch. Just keep trying to soften the edges of every word, vowels etc. Saying "Ah ha" over and over trying to soften the A and the transition to the h in ha is great practice.