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What Lies Behind

Started by Sephirah, May 31, 2012, 11:10:12 PM

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Sephirah

Couldn't think of a better title. :-\ Oh well. This is the first poem I've wrote in quite a while, so I apologise for it not being very good.

What Lies Behind


A birth that was not hers to choose,
A life she can't define,
Existence bound within a ruse,
Tied up with Nature's twine.

A boy! A son! A fine young lad!
Such wonder he shall be!
Confused, she wonders why she's sad,
At what her elders see.

As adolescence takes its hold,
Upon this light withdrawn,
Wrought changes carved with numbing cold,
Amid the endless scorn.

The years roll on, she starts to feel,
Within is not without,
And self-awareness breaks the seal,
Of silent, lingering doubt.

Now darkness lies behind her eyes,
What desperate, pain-filled rage,
Incessant, damning, hate seared cries,
Her soul within a cage.

At last she spies salvation's peace,
Through words of strangers kind,
The path of Change to now release,
Male shackles from her mind.
Natura nihil frustra facit.

"You yourself, as much as anybody in the entire universe, deserve your love and affection." ~ Buddha.

If you're dealing with self esteem issues, maybe click here. There may be something you find useful. :)
Above all... remember: you are beautiful, you are valuable, and you have a shining spark of magnificence within you. Don't let anyone take that from you. Embrace who you are. <3
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Jamie D

That's beautiful.  It talks to me.
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Sephirah

Thank you *hug*, that means a lot.
Natura nihil frustra facit.

"You yourself, as much as anybody in the entire universe, deserve your love and affection." ~ Buddha.

If you're dealing with self esteem issues, maybe click here. There may be something you find useful. :)
Above all... remember: you are beautiful, you are valuable, and you have a shining spark of magnificence within you. Don't let anyone take that from you. Embrace who you are. <3
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Brooke777

I love it. It stirs many emotions. Thank you for sharing.
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peky

It is superb, lovely, oustanding, it made this woman weep
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