Hitch hikers guide?
Try to slow down a little and concentrate on clearly pronouncing each word. The rhythm is there, but needs to be developed more. Keep working at your inflections. Listen to the tv, radio, other women around you to get the feel for the rises and falls in each word. But really, you are coming along nicely! just keep practicing.
Another thing, breath from the diaphragm and speak from the throat. Practice humming at various pitches 🙂