Hi everyone.
Been a while since I posted anything. Not full time or anything yet so I am just practicing from time to time to make sure I do not regress, hopefully I still sound OK I got some good feedback before.
I quite like some of the parts of these recordings but other parts I think I have got a little monotone or have bad rhythm to my sentences. Anyway as I say in the files I would really appreciate any feedback so thanks a lot!
https://soundcloud.com/olivia1988-1/16thaprilnowarmup/s-QDXC6https://soundcloud.com/olivia1988-1/16thapril2ndattempt/s-mZKYzPS
Anna, hard to tell but your voice in the short clip had a quality to it that the longer recording did not have. It felt a bit more pinched or something, which was good in the way that it made it sound better, I think in terms of resonance. However to me it also sounded a little overly pinched, like you could tell it was not relaxed enough. I think you should try and copy the first recording there and then copy a short line from your second and try to tell the difference. Then try a bit more of a relaxed version of the first voice.
Course I am no pro and the first recording was pretty short. However I definitely had good sucess in listening back to bits of my practicing that sounded better than other bits and comparing them to worse bits to try and feel the difference.