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Started by EdekStaszek, July 12, 2013, 10:20:21 PM

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EdekStaszek

Okay people, want to play a game?
It goes like this, I start a story, a paragraph only, then we proceed to continue it, no more than 2 paragraphs per person.

Example
Person1: Once day Bob & Sally where walking down the street.
Person2: Bob wanted to go to the park.
Person3: Sally said no, because she saw Dave there.
Person4: Bob asked whats wrong with Dave?
Person2: Sally replied: We just don't get along.
Person4: So they both went on.

and on and on, but with paragraphs at a time, not sentences. Every comment must build off the last.
Write the story in
GreenAnd any comments you have inBlack. Don't put reply's in the posts, please!
-----Let us begin-----
    John sat home, on his bed. It was a hot summer day, and he had nothing to do. He was grounded so he could not use electronics, but he was not a social person, he had few friends. Then his friend called on the phone. He was asked to go to the park by his friend,(I'll leave this up to the next person, who it is) so he started on his way. A few miserable hot minutes later, he arrived at the park.
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Jamie D

John enjoyed the shade of the trees and the sight of little children playing.  Then, he heard a voice calling.

"John, I'm over here."  It was his friend, Emily, sitting on the teeter-totter.
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