Hi Emilee.
Firstly, WELL DONE GIRL!!! Yikes, that first outing can be stressful, and you survived it, so good on ya!
OK, the critique and pointers: you've got plenty of really good raw material to work with, so I shall largely echo Tiffany: if you dolled yourself up a bit more - hair, and a little (more) makeup you'd look absolutely fabulousy darling

. If you fixed your hair a bit, you'd be even better than that!
Hugs
Julia