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Started by Mark3, September 20, 2014, 09:42:43 AM

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Mark3

I wrote a simple poem today, when I was walking along a quiet sidewalk near a lighthouse
and lake near where I live... I never came up with a title..??

Now, I know it's not exactly right, some of my phrases I got slightly wrong, and can be critiqued as such.?
But hey, it's not that easy to make things rythme on an early Saturday morning when I should still be sleeping in....  :D

Thank you so much,
for this wonderful day,
so I can do what I must,
in my own simple way.
I have no more burden upon my back,
weighing me down and forcing me back.
No more boxes, walls or space,
that I must fit inside of,
to walk in they're race.
I can now walk my own race,
be what ever I choose,
mostly male, strong and tall,
with some female mixed in,
nameless and without labels,
without guilt, lying or shame.
Even though I'm the same,
person I was,
my burden of staying between
the CIS lines is gone,
I'm happy and free,
and totally me.......
by Mark
"The soul is beyond male and female as it is beyond life and death."
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crowcrow223

I hope You are, as you said, indeed free :) great poem!
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Mark3

Thank you Paula... Thanks very much..  :)


Thanks also Crowcrow..  :)
"The soul is beyond male and female as it is beyond life and death."
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helen2010

Really like this.  Light, uplifting and positive.  Love it.

Aisla
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Mark3

Thank you very much Aisla...  :)
"The soul is beyond male and female as it is beyond life and death."
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