I coach voice transition in MD, DE, VA, and honestly, that's very nice progress. I don't know how long you worked to get there, but your pitch is nice....could be a tiny bit higher, but not really necessary. A lot of that will be tied to visual body cues. The resonance and modulation of your voice needs work, but will become more stable with daily practice, and will fall more in tune with average female voice patterns over time. As Janet said, watch out for your word choices and enunciation. Listen constantly to other women. Make discreet eavesdropping your favorite hobby for a while. Find a fundamental note, ie G3, A3, and memorize it. Practice, practice, practice.
Nice work, Sarah
Miss Bev