Hi, Chloe,
I know everybody is waiting for the continuation of your story, so romantic so beautiful. Even if the story does not end with the proverbial "and the live ever happy," you will always have that wonderful memory.
I can see that the beauty of your soul shines through your writing, a hart of a poem. I know I will never be as beautiful as you are and time will forbid me from experience that kind of love, but just knowing that somebody like you can achieve that bliss feels me with great joy, thank you for sharing,
Love
Kate D