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Title: A poem. (R rated)
Post by: K Style Addiction on November 18, 2012, 07:14:00 PM
Post by: K Style Addiction on November 18, 2012, 07:14:00 PM
->-bleeped-<- Love
by DonnaTroy
Utter sweet nothings into my ear
->-bleeped-<- that just give me a beer
So this is love, but i feel nothing
so many songs about this feeling
this isolation keeps me reeling
Utter sweet nothings into my ear
->-bleeped-<- that just give me a beer
I've had many friends, love is nothing but a fantasy
foreplay for sexual game, show me your love
i'll tell you my name
Utter sweet nothings into my ear
fu*k love just give me a beer
Don't worry about me people, nothing happened to me it just came to me. I honestly find this not as good as my superman one.
by DonnaTroy
Utter sweet nothings into my ear
->-bleeped-<- that just give me a beer
So this is love, but i feel nothing
so many songs about this feeling
this isolation keeps me reeling
Utter sweet nothings into my ear
->-bleeped-<- that just give me a beer
I've had many friends, love is nothing but a fantasy
foreplay for sexual game, show me your love
i'll tell you my name
Utter sweet nothings into my ear
fu*k love just give me a beer
Don't worry about me people, nothing happened to me it just came to me. I honestly find this not as good as my superman one.
Title: Re: A poem. (R rated)
Post by: MadelineB on November 19, 2012, 12:25:24 AM
Post by: MadelineB on November 19, 2012, 12:25:24 AM
Thank you for sharing more of your writing here.
Even heroes and heroines sometimes need a beer.
When lovers can't communicate with language or Morse,
being jaded and cynical is par for the course.
But when we're done venting its "back on that horse".
Write on!
-Maddie
Even heroes and heroines sometimes need a beer.
When lovers can't communicate with language or Morse,
being jaded and cynical is par for the course.
But when we're done venting its "back on that horse".
Write on!
-Maddie
Title: Re: A poem. (R rated)
Post by: K Style Addiction on November 19, 2012, 12:32:13 AM
Post by: K Style Addiction on November 19, 2012, 12:32:13 AM
Quoteback on that horse.
That's the way it is, when you get knocked off...you must get back on that stupid horse again and if you stay on long enough is when you win...i guess.