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Title: Monday Is Black - A Poem
Post by: K Style Addiction on April 14, 2013, 11:56:26 PM
Post by: K Style Addiction on April 14, 2013, 11:56:26 PM
Monday is Black
by DonnaTroy
Monday is black, what's the point in going back
Tuesday hurts, life is a losing game
Wednesday is the same, no one else to blame
Thursday is getting close, i'm wiltering like a rose
Friday is here, moments till i dissappear
Saturday is pain, everything i disdain
Sunday is peace, i cease to be forevermore
Monday is black.
by DonnaTroy
Monday is black, what's the point in going back
Tuesday hurts, life is a losing game
Wednesday is the same, no one else to blame
Thursday is getting close, i'm wiltering like a rose
Friday is here, moments till i dissappear
Saturday is pain, everything i disdain
Sunday is peace, i cease to be forevermore
Monday is black.
Title: Re: Monday Is Black - A Poem
Post by: Robin Mack on September 19, 2013, 04:00:43 PM
Post by: Robin Mack on September 19, 2013, 04:00:43 PM
Wow. Tough stuff. I love how, despite the finality of Sunday's line, it begins again on Monday. I feel similarly through the week, when I'm having to present male, but the weekends (and some evenings) I can truly dress to reflect how I feel. But then it's back to black on Monday.
Thank you for sharing your poem. :)
Thank you for sharing your poem. :)