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Title: Poem 10: "Love, Dad"
Post by: YinYanga on October 19, 2014, 05:17:18 PM
Post by: YinYanga on October 19, 2014, 05:17:18 PM
~"Love, Dad"
I am awestruck
With the ease
Of your acceptance
Still too troubled
To enjoy a glance
A heartfelt smile
I realize that
Most of all
It is the first time
Where I rejoice
You're a parent
It is no crime
I am awestruck
With the ease
Of your acceptance
Still too troubled
To enjoy a glance
A heartfelt smile
I realize that
Most of all
It is the first time
Where I rejoice
You're a parent
It is no crime
Title: Re: Poem 10: "Love, Dad"
Post by: Mark3 on October 19, 2014, 06:28:57 PM
Post by: Mark3 on October 19, 2014, 06:28:57 PM
Thats a very good one..!
Like a whole chapter of a book reduced to a few of it's most beautiful and moving words. :)
Like a whole chapter of a book reduced to a few of it's most beautiful and moving words. :)
Title: Re: Poem 10: "Love, Dad"
Post by: YinYanga on October 20, 2014, 05:02:07 AM
Post by: YinYanga on October 20, 2014, 05:02:07 AM
Thanks Mark, it's been a good week to write a little :)