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Title: Poem
Post by: lindagrl on December 12, 2014, 09:11:35 PM
Post by: lindagrl on December 12, 2014, 09:11:35 PM
Sometimes i can´t sleep and i have to write,
this came to me in the middle of the night
Quest
What do i yearn for, how do i dream
a familiar setting in a far away scene
find my peace in a presence for real
to cast away armor instinctively feel
How will i get there i ask yet i know
without me there is nowhere to go
i pray and i wonder i want it so much
smiles in the mirror a delicate touch
When it will happen what will remain
the pain of rebirth sans the refrain
´tis sweet to my essence i do not fear
oh now i can feel it move ever so near
Linda
this came to me in the middle of the night
Quest
What do i yearn for, how do i dream
a familiar setting in a far away scene
find my peace in a presence for real
to cast away armor instinctively feel
How will i get there i ask yet i know
without me there is nowhere to go
i pray and i wonder i want it so much
smiles in the mirror a delicate touch
When it will happen what will remain
the pain of rebirth sans the refrain
´tis sweet to my essence i do not fear
oh now i can feel it move ever so near
Linda
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Sincerely Tegan on December 12, 2014, 09:27:17 PM
Post by: Sincerely Tegan on December 12, 2014, 09:27:17 PM
Beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.
;D,
Teg
;D,
Teg
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: lindagrl on December 13, 2014, 08:15:11 AM
Post by: lindagrl on December 13, 2014, 08:15:11 AM
Thank you Teg,
am very pleased that you like it :)
am very pleased that you like it :)
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: katrinaw on March 26, 2015, 07:28:12 AM
Post by: katrinaw on March 26, 2015, 07:28:12 AM
Hi Linda, only just read this, absolutely poignant... so beautiful
L Katy
L Katy
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Lady Smith on March 26, 2015, 12:09:22 PM
Post by: Lady Smith on March 26, 2015, 12:09:22 PM
Beautiful, thank you for sharing your poem with us.
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: CarrotInsanity on April 01, 2015, 03:02:01 PM
Post by: CarrotInsanity on April 01, 2015, 03:02:01 PM
That's a really lovely poem. You have a way with words. Keep writing, the world needs to hear you.
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: WindyRevelations on April 02, 2015, 01:02:53 AM
Post by: WindyRevelations on April 02, 2015, 01:02:53 AM
Wow, that is really beautiful. It flows so nicely. Great job.
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: lindagrl on October 07, 2015, 08:10:18 PM
Post by: lindagrl on October 07, 2015, 08:10:18 PM
Thank you all for your gracious comments. Better late than never to respond, apologies for how long it took.
Title: Re: Poem
Post by: cindianna_jones on October 25, 2015, 12:36:19 PM
Post by: cindianna_jones on October 25, 2015, 12:36:19 PM
So much in so few words. Yes, we get it and it is done very well.
Cindi
Cindi