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Title: Spoken Word Project - Need Help
Post by: Jamie97 on May 24, 2016, 03:43:54 PM
Hi Everyone
I'm an amateur musician and producer, and recently I wrote an instrumental that's just begging for some spoken word poetry over the top of it. Problem is, I've written like two poems ever, and I hate the sound of my own voice. I would love it if one of you could listen to the track and maybe write and record some lyrics. Like I say, I am an amateur producer working in my bedroom studio, so it's unlikely the song will make any money or anything, it would just be great fun to do.
Anyway, thanks for reading, here's the link: https://soundcloud.com/james-pettitt-97/spoken-rough-mix
Title: Re: Spoken Word Project - Need Help
Post by: Newgirl Dani on July 24, 2016, 09:39:07 PM
This is really very good!  A very nice build.....then steady instrumental work that would sound excellent as is, ended with the perfect deescalation back down again.  Well done.  In my humble opinion, the beginning and the end would be the areas for the spoken word.  Nice