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Title: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 12:01:07 AM
Haven't written for years.  I'll take it as a very good sign that my creativity has come back, it's like I've got a soul again.
Very much out of practice.



I'm swaying, longing for your touch,
I'm straying, wanting it so much.
I'm praying, hoping to burn in hell,
Obeying your command, under your spell.

Smiting my resolve, my will breaks in,
Biting my lip, you start our night of sin,
Lighting my desire, boundaries are broken,
Igniting the taboo, our bodies just awoken.

So daring, your fingers are tonight!
Declaring, seeking to delight,
Uncaring of convictions of tomorrow,
Ensnaring my passion to overflow.

Such carnality, my heart jumps out my chest,
My banality is lost in the passion of excess,
The finality approaches and I silently give up the fight,
And reality departs as I approach that sweet white light...
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:08:59 AM
Wow, that's risque but poetic.  :)
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 12:10:05 AM
Quote from: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:08:59 AM
Wow, that's risque but poetic.  :)

I are horny:(

aeriuhae;rgaiuh;sithiaht

Darn my traitorous body.
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:13:28 AM
Quote from: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 12:10:05 AM
Quote from: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:08:59 AM
Wow, that's risque but poetic.  :)

I are horny:(

aeriuhae;rgaiuh;sithiaht

Darn my traitorous body.

<sigh>

At least you've had relationships.  :'(
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 12:15:32 AM
Quote from: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:13:28 AM

<sigh>

At least you've had relationships.  :'(

I don't consider 2-4 week flings relationships...

The beauty of saving yourself is it's best when it finally happens.  Or so they say... I wouldn't know.

Put up some pretty pics of yourself and you'll get some calls:D

Laterz, gonna go myspace whore and find some marine to hang out with tonight.
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: deviousxen on December 12, 2008, 12:18:45 AM
Sexy tiem
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:19:13 AM
I'm the opposite of pretty.  You'd have to be half-blind and schizophrenic to see me as a woman.

Anyway, I like your writing.
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: lady amarant on December 12, 2008, 01:40:36 AM
Cool poetry Annwyn. You write really well. I think it's safe to say your soul is returning. Which is awesome!  ;D

Quote from: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:19:13 AMI'm the opposite of pretty.  You'd have to be half-blind and schizophrenic to see me as a woman.

Pffft! I don't believe you. TS people are known to be slightly less than objective about their looks. :P

~Simone.
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 01:45:43 AM
Quote from: lady amarant on December 12, 2008, 01:40:36 AM
Cool poetry Annwyn. You write really well. I think it's safe to say your soul is returning. Which is awesome!  ;D

Quote from: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 12:19:13 AMI'm the opposite of pretty.  You'd have to be half-blind and schizophrenic to see me as a woman.

Pffft! I don't believe you. TS people are known to be slightly less than objective about their looks. :P

~Simone.

Oh, it's ON!  I'll put up a pic tomorrow (later today?) after I get some sleep and at least look human.  I'll show you.   I'll show you all!   >:-)
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: lady amarant on December 12, 2008, 02:02:56 AM
Quote from: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 01:45:43 AMOh, it's ON!  I'll put up a pic tomorrow (later today?) after I get some sleep and at least look human.  I'll show you.   I'll show you all!   >:-)

Oh, are we having a throw down here?! I'll just have to go dig out my camera then! :P

~Simone.
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: NicholeW. on December 12, 2008, 05:38:01 AM
That was very nice, Ann.

Yes, I believe you are horny! :) Sounds as if your soul and libido are quite intimately attached to one another at the moment! :laugh: :laugh:

Nichole
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 10:31:53 AM
Quote from: Nichole on December 12, 2008, 05:38:01 AM
That was very nice, Ann.

Yes, I believe you are horny! :) Sounds as if your soul and libido are quite intimately attached to one another at the moment! :laugh: :laugh:

Nichole

O_O

I have a hickie.  And my hangover refuses to allow me to remember how it got there.

So what's this about a throw-down between Simone and Kaitlyn?  ;D
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Kaitlyn on December 12, 2008, 10:48:18 AM
I think it's about how I look like the Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man, and Simone doesn't believe me.  But that's just my take.

Pic is up in my blog.   :P
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: NicholeW. on December 12, 2008, 02:04:04 PM
Quote from: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 10:31:53 AM

I have a hickie.  And my hangover refuses to allow me to remember how it got there.

O My!! Your transition is going eversowell, Ann!!

You have down the southern belle mechanics already!!   >:-) >:-)

Excellent!

Nichole
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 02:55:13 PM
Quote from: Nichole on December 12, 2008, 02:04:04 PM
Quote from: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 10:31:53 AM

I have a hickie.  And my hangover refuses to allow me to remember how it got there.

O My!! Your transition is going eversowell, Ann!!

You have down the southern belle mechanics already!!   >:-) >:-)

Excellent!

Nichole
Southen belle???
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: NicholeW. on December 12, 2008, 03:41:17 PM
You have never found the Old South way? That if you're drunk enough your virginity is preserved, endlessly? :)

I am shocked.

Girl, you really need to find some girlfriends!

Surely South Carolina isn't that far removed from Georgia, Alabama, Tennessee and Mississippi that that doesn't still happen!!

O, my! Is change really coming to the South? Surely not!

Nichole
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Sandy on December 12, 2008, 04:14:39 PM
Anne, sometimes you are so over the top, yet that prose has me squirming in my seat!

I think your muse is returning quite well, my dear!

-Sandy(turn on the fan, please)
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Janet_Girl on December 12, 2008, 10:32:35 PM
Leave it to Ann to spout beautiful poetry.

Her and her marines.

Janet

Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: Annwyn on December 12, 2008, 11:22:01 PM
I didn't take my pants off Nichole, and I have no intention to.

I had a wonderful lesbian out on a wonderful date tonight, and after an hour of kissing I was sorely tempted but, I kept em on.

It somehow seems that in the past few weeks I've gone from quiet to having a new date every night...

Interesting how things happen.
Title: Re: That Sweet White Light...
Post by: klodefm42 on February 02, 2009, 10:26:15 PM
Interesting.