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Title: The girl I see
Post by: Melissa on August 14, 2006, 12:06:22 PM
Post by: Melissa on August 14, 2006, 12:06:22 PM
Ok, I finally felt inspired enough to write a poem.
The girl I see
I see a girl with great looking hair
she makes me want to stop and stare
I really like her choice in clothes
Her face is cute including her nose
She does a good job with her makeup
She took her time and didn't just wake up
She has spunk and seems really smart
She loves animals and has a big heart
She always learning something new
She knows there's more than false and true
She tries to be kind to all her friends
and feels bad for those she offends
She sees the good in folks she meets
both online and in the streets
She has a lot of love inside
and never does passion subside
Sometimes inside she does feel sad
and other times she does get mad
but this is few and far between
and when she does, it goes unseen
She gives her time to those in need
and tries to be a friend indeed
Who is this girl of whom I see?
The girl in the mirror is little old me
Melissa
The girl I see
I see a girl with great looking hair
she makes me want to stop and stare
I really like her choice in clothes
Her face is cute including her nose
She does a good job with her makeup
She took her time and didn't just wake up
She has spunk and seems really smart
She loves animals and has a big heart
She always learning something new
She knows there's more than false and true
She tries to be kind to all her friends
and feels bad for those she offends
She sees the good in folks she meets
both online and in the streets
She has a lot of love inside
and never does passion subside
Sometimes inside she does feel sad
and other times she does get mad
but this is few and far between
and when she does, it goes unseen
She gives her time to those in need
and tries to be a friend indeed
Who is this girl of whom I see?
The girl in the mirror is little old me
Melissa
Title: Re: The girl I see
Post by: stephanie_craxford on August 14, 2006, 12:17:05 PM
Post by: stephanie_craxford on August 14, 2006, 12:17:05 PM
Very nice Melissa. I am useless when it comes to things like this.
Steph
Steph
Title: Re: The girl I see
Post by: Chaunte on August 14, 2006, 12:18:36 PM
Post by: Chaunte on August 14, 2006, 12:18:36 PM
I like. It really describes you well.
Chaunte
Chaunte