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General Discussions => Hobbies => Writing => Topic started by: ILoveTSWomen on December 05, 2005, 05:09:37 PM

Title: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: ILoveTSWomen on December 05, 2005, 05:09:37 PM
I Would

I would chase away the sorrows
and sadness from your eyes
and replace them with memories
of only good times that went by

I would be your nightly pillow
for you to lay your head
listening for your heartbeat
understanding each word you said

I would create a sunny morning
to greet you each new day
chase away the rain clouds
that may have gotten in your way

I would paint a distant rainbow
but this one would always last
so you would know your pot of gold
is  the future not the past

I would shoot a star across the sky
and wish your dreams come true
then you could look out every night
to see this wish for you

I would play a constant melody
that would strum across your heart
a place to rest awhile
when the world becomes too hard

I would build for you a fortress
so you would always know
love will be waiting there for you
wherever you may go

I would light the corners of your life
from the ocean floor to the stars above
so when you look at all the world
you will know that you are loved

Specially and specifically created today,
12/5/05 for the love of my life
Corine Sarita Uilani Valparriso Linam (I love your name)
by Dennis Alan Gray[/i]

aka DennisInGA
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: ILoveTSWomen on December 05, 2005, 05:27:05 PM
No, thank you for the kind words Melissa  :)

DennisInGA
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: joanna on December 05, 2005, 08:13:12 PM

Hi DennisInGa,

You poem is very beautiful.    It shows you have a creative and sensitive nature.  I hope your SO realizes that she has a very caring and loving friend in you.   Your words show that you must love her very, very much.  Saying I love you with poetry can be so romantic. 

Your SO does have a very pretty and unusual name.  If you wrote this for her in one day she must have indeed been a great inspiration for you. 

Best wishes,


joanna

Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: ILoveTSWomen on December 05, 2005, 08:29:00 PM
Thanks Joanna..

yes, an inspiration no doubt... and Yes I love her very much..

Part of the reason I am here.. MtF TG.. and one wonderful woman...

Now I just have to get her to say "I do"   ;D

DennisInGA
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: Tiffanie on December 08, 2005, 09:37:25 PM
That is beautiful, Dennis.  Thank you for sharing
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: Sara on January 19, 2006, 10:26:09 PM
Dennis, you are so beautiful. Your words are sweet and tender and they made me cry. If only I had the love you have shown in your poem.

Sara.
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: Peggiann on January 19, 2006, 11:03:44 PM
Yes is evendent that you love completely exclusivley unconditionally, and soully with your intire being. What a lucky lady to be on the receiving end of such a love.

Thank you for sharing Dennis,

Smiles,
Peggiann
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: Dennis on January 20, 2006, 12:45:19 AM
And where is Dennis? I miss him. He was so easy to fob that blame the guy stuff onto. Come on bud, come back!

Dennis
Title: Re: May I share this with my friends here.
Post by: Shelley on January 21, 2006, 05:44:28 AM
Hey DennisinGA,

I see you were here a couple of days ago but didn't post. Come back and say hi I miss your take on life and would like to read any new efforts in poetry as I really enjoyed this one.

Shelley
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