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The Prose and Poems of Lori Dee

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Charlotte Kitty ✅

Quote from: Lori Dee on February 25, 2026, 04:28:20 PMThanks, Charlotte!

Are you getting ready for your flight?

When you know the details, let us know in the Staff Forums >> AFK when you will be offline. Take it easy and get all the rest you can.

I don't fly until 6th and my op is on 9th march. To be honest will only be offline 9th I'd say. I'll probably be bored stiff, so will be online anyway the few days after.

I'm at work until Thursday so will be sorting packing this weekend.

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Lori Dee ✅

I have been busy lately, but in a good way.

I have revised Out of Tolerance. The story, characters, and narrative are unchanged. I just cleaned up the text, corrected errors, removed unnecessary repetition, and improved clarity.

That has been submitted, and the revised edition is now live on Amazon. I am so grateful to those of you who read it and gave me feedback. I learned a lot from you.

I have finished the second book in the series, Samaria. I used the feedback readers of the first book gave me to start the second book. I even dedicated it to you. I learned so much along the way, and I feel that my writing has improved greatly.

I tried to submit Samaria to the publisher to check for formatting errors and such, but apparently they limit how many manuscripts you can submit in a given week. So Samaria will get submitted on Monday and go live sometime next week.

I have some ideas for the direction the third book in the series will take, but I am still figuring it out.

Meanwhile, I have been updating my website, fixing links, and adjusting things. I set up a Series Page on Amazon where all the books will be listed. Apparently, that needs to be reviewed before it goes live, too. < sigh >

TL;DR

Out of Tolerance (Revised Edition) is now on sale in paperback only. (sorry.)
My website has been updated and will be getting a few more updates when the Series Page goes live and Samaria is published.

Last, but not least, thank you to everyone who has read Out of Tolerance and gave me feedback on it. I really appreciate your comments, criticisms, and compliments. That's how I learn.
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