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I am old and I am new

Started by Gabrielle, November 22, 2013, 02:58:48 PM

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Gabrielle

This was from my introduction.  I make no claim that my poetry is any good.  I write it to help me work things out in my head.  So, it is therapy of sorts.

So I am old and I am new
Cruel Fate she said the payment's due
of debts she'd rather not forget
A lifetime full of sad regret

I'm not finished despite my fears
I've paid you Fate a million tears
and anguished sobs - a broken heart
No Fate, not yet, you'll get your part

My life's account is in the black
My path is clear and right on track
and there's too much that I must do
You'll have to wait til I am through

So I have come and I have gone
To find myself a bright new dawn
on journeys over land and sea
to be the person I should be

Yes I am old
But I am new


Transition to me is about renewal.  About uncharted territory.  And the journey of a lifetime.

The poem is also a little bit of a double entendre.  That's because I am both old and new in more than one sense.  "Gabrielle" is my new name.
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Robin Mack

*hug*  A lovely view of transition, Gabrielle.  :)
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Gabrielle

Thank you.  Hey!  That was my 100th post too.
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