It's not a great recording and at times I couldn't quite make out what was being said. However, I could still hear a very feminine voice. There is still work to be done, but after just two sessions that's quite remarkable. Gradually it will become easier and you'll be able to control the breathing a lot easier.
But well done. If that's you in the avatar you look very feminine, and with the voice you are developing already you'll be a knockout.
Well done
Caroline