Way too over the top. I can see a very pretty girl under all the goo. You want to accent your features not overwhelm them. Take the eyeliner down a notch and get your eyebrows waxed and shaped. Sorry I am quite socially inept, but you did ask for honesty. Redo it lightly and let's see you again. I bet you are stunning. You have a great smile. Have you seen the tutorials on You Tube?