I think you need a different wig. I'd say you need some bangs to cover your forehead but not going lower than that. The color suits you though. If you cannot find another one - maybe you can get a hairstylist to cut this one to have the bangs, I know a place in Chicago that would do it. I think it's also too long for your age - you probably would look much better with a shoulder-length. I like second and third photons more - the way you wear your hair to a side, rather than splitting it at the center.
And you can get your brows shaped professionally, it's not that expensive.
Otherwise, you look good and your makeup is really nice. Your chin will soften with HRT, your skin will soften as well, your nose and brow ridge can be corrected with FFS if you want it. And you won't need to cover beard shadow after you remove facial hair permanently.
But again, all of that is visible to someone who knows your past, and takes time to study little details on a picture. To a casual observer - you look female, and even if they clock you as a trans female, it's not the end of the world.
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