Hi Amrisa
I have to agree that it's dificult to see you behind the camara..
If you could take another picture when convnient, but take it holding the camera a little lower
and to one side it might be easier to comment..
From what I can see, you would look passable, but I agree with Barbie that "the girls" need to
be a little lower. If they are too high it looks false, and emphasises the width of your shoulders.
Good Luck
Chrissty