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Confession of a broken Heart

Started by Kisa, November 16, 2006, 08:22:50 PM

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Kisa

I wrote these songs!

2. Story of the end
Written by me

Is this the story of my end?
a girl who wanted it all
only to have it wash away
she cried
while they took away
every piece of her soul.
She felt worthless
as the people who she thought
would be her friends
pushed her away

(chorus)
where is her
sweet sweet
sweet sweet
escape
from the pain pain pain
pain pain
where is her sweet escape
to hope and heaven?

She's getting very scared
she don't know how to love
the people who do her wrong
she tried to fit into christian society
but was a total failure
so they kicked her off
their grape vine
and told her to
go go away
we don't need
a person like you
who don't know the lord
who thinks there is no sin
well, woman
(chorus)

I tell you there is sin
and you will go to hell
for all the things
you said and done to people
who cares, if you got a heart
our GOD isn't like that
he send you to hell
if you do something wrong
and I said
you throw me in the fire
But I know GOD too
and he would never put
this precious girl
into the buring fire
(chorus)
Posted on: November 16, 2006, 08:20:57 PM
A short poem

Cold day
Written by me

Its a cold day
I feel no warmth
I feel like my heart is frozen on
this cold day


:Dtold you it was short. Sometimes, I like writing short stuff when I feel really sad.
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tinkerbell

I like the song very much, Kisa....and the poem as well.  Some of the greatest poems are very short like yours but their meaning is vast.

Keep writing! :)


Quote from: KisaSometimes, I like writing short stuff when I feel really sad.

I do too.  They say that the best inspiration a person can have is when she is sad; in my case it is true..


tinkerbell :icon_chick:
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Kisa

thank you, I really love your signature.
Posted on: November 16, 2006, 08:47:29 PM
1. I got trouble
    Written by me

oh you think
you got me wanting your ways
you think my heart is in danger
you feel you're my angel
but I think you're a devil
and you can't accept
you're wasting you're time
one day you will be crying
and I'll wake up just fine


(chorus)
I got trouble
because of you
you think you can love me
better, you're wanting a second chance
I got trouble
I got trouble
because of you

oh you think you're some cool hot shot
you don't know why girls don't cry
you say you only want one person
and that I am your back up
I think you need to stop smoking
and hurting me so
i don't want someone like you in
my life
leave me be
and you will be just fine
(chorus)

oooooooh yah
ooooh yah
its over oh yah
(chorus)

2. Spaces
   Written by me

oh this lonely girl
she wonders
where check out point is
she feels follow
by the demons
while she tries
to get a real life
out west
oh she hates being in a world full of shallow
she needs hope and prayers

(chorus)
she needs spaces
hope and GOD
she needs spaces
in her life
for someone to love her
she needs true love
baby
she needs spaces in her life

she sings this song
a lonely country ballad
feeling unloved in this world
she has no one but
the folks who don't give a damn
she prays to GOD
that she will find her soulmate
and they will take her from this place
of being trapped.
how can she do that
(chorus)

she's all alone
she needs someone to call her own
she's all alone
she needs someone to care
she hates being all alone
(chorus)

Posted on: November 17, 2006, 11:29:21 AM

3. Loving pain
   Jaci

crying again
feeling worthless
same ol
same ol emotions
I don't know where to go
I don't know who to trust
because the people
I used to trust
gave me
loving pain
a pain they said was
because they loved me
a pain they said I will understand
but I don't understand
this loving pain.

oh I cross this bridge
before, trying to get accept
for who I am
I try so hard
I wanted people to love me
I wanted a soulmate to call my own
but it seems like I'm in sinking sand
and I cry alone
I feel like I'll die alone
because of this loving pain.

Gonna not care anymore
because I know
not everyone will love me
gonna get used to being alone
because I know
not everyone will want to be my friend
its hard getting used to
it, its hard getting used
to not having someone to love you
I look online, I look in real life
but I seem not able to fine someone
who will understand
how I feel. oh they just give me loving pain
and push me away


oh I cross this bridge
before, trying to get accept
for who I am
I try so hard
I wanted people to love me
I wanted a soulmate to call my own
but it seems like I'm in sinking sand
and I cry alone
I feel like I'll die alone
because of this loving pain.

they give me a pain they call love
and push me away.
Posted on: November 17, 2006, 11:32:28 AM


4. screwed up
   jaci


big deal
oh god
how can you think
you're the best in
the west
you don't understand why
a girl turns you down
maybe because you're such a clown
I'm here to tell you
get over yourself

(chorus)
oh it wasn't such a lost
you're single now
and you should be happy
I don't know what
the big deal is
why must it be such a big deal?
I guess you think no one
wanting you is screwed up

whatever
get over yourself
you're so vain
you think
you're god and we should all
bow down to you
well, Im not going to bow down to you
Because I'm not the one for you
I don't even want you
why do you want to trap me?
because you think you can make me happy
haha, you can't make me happy
(chorus)

get over yourself
na na na
na na na na
get over yourself
I said get over your self
and stop being so v.a.i.n
(chorus)
Posted on: November 17, 2006, 11:39:57 AM

5. Mine
   Jaci

hey jesus
do you still
love me
even though
i been hateful
and sinful
do you still care?
hey, GOD
you answered my prayers
when I had a bad haircut
you heard my cries
and now it's so long.
hey, now can you make me a super star like britney
or give me a cowgirl or cowboy?
but I don't think you're mine
because I hear you don't see me worthy

(chorus)
oh god
if you were mine
I ask for so much
I be selfish
I be greedy
I'll ask for true love
tons of money
and attention
won't have a regret
only if you were mine
all the jewels will fall out like rain
ill be able to sleep in money
if you were mine

I know
god this song sounds selfish
but I feel I payed so much in my life
its my chance
to think of only me
but maybe
you don't pay attention to demands
because my prayers are never answer
now I'm going to vegas, going to see my cousin
you tell me I shouldn't go
but I'm sick of staying home
now it's time to be a real star
I guess I gotta push you out of my life
(chorus)

oh but none of this greed brings me happiness
in the end
but it feels so good to
spend and spend
and use and use
but God you tell me
If I'm gonna fly away
don't fly without you
and don't use and use
(chorus)
Posted on: November 17, 2006, 11:47:36 AM
6. Never Say Never
    Jaci

oh you said you would love me
forever, and you will be there
but I been waiting more then
6 years and you're still
haven't rescue me
I wonder
maybe you found someone else
maybe you found someone better then me
I hope you read this
because I need to know
why you didn't show

(chorus)
I have given up on you
but the voice in my head says
never say never
you're love will show
but I need to give up now
I'm sick of being the clown
but the voice in my head
says never say never

I plan
what we would do in my head
spend thanksgiving and christmas
with eachother
and kiss under the mistle toe
but it seems this winter
will be really cold
I wonder where you are
are you married
do you have a family
did GOD give you someone better
then me
(chorus)

where are u
where are u
i want to know
because
im tired of
so tired of waiting
where are you
where are you
i'm sick of dying
and crying without you
(chorus)

I look where the sun is
I look where the stars are
you're not here
you're nowhere
and I'm hurting myself today
and I told myself
my love
never did
never could
never did
never give a.............

of my beauty
of my real beauty
(chorus)
Posted on: November 17, 2006, 11:53:42 AM
7. the pain is on me(an old country song)
   Jaci

The pain is on me
gotta pay for you're sins
like I promise I would
Don't worry it won't hurt
I'm used to it
so you can go on
live you're life
and I'll pay
for all you're mess ups
because the pain is on
me, oh the pain is on me
the pain is on me
and I promise
I wouldn't cry

Hey
I told you
you got no dept
just give me your tears
and I'll take them all in
its the way it has to be
you can do you're sinning
and I'll suffer for you
because that is what I was meant to do
just ask forgivness
from the good lord
when you're done.
Be happy
I'll pay
because the pain
is on me, oh the pain is on me
the pain is on me
so don't you worry
because the pain is on me
I promise I wouldn't cry.

Posted on: November 17, 2006, 12:01:16 PM
8. let her fly
    Jaci

you're mad
you're sad
you want her back
but you know she don't want that
so you take in booze
and get drunk and try to forget
you're pain in this game
well, hey
I tell you
to stop crying
and live life
let her fly
and live your life

you're crying
you're writing
gothic songs
hoping to ease
the pain
anf guilt
now you're going to a party
going to spy on her
I say
don't go
you gotta move on
let her live her life
and you can live your own
no reason for the pain
gotta live it up
and forget the heartache
so live life
let her fly
live your life

oooh you're gonna sing
no more drama
no more drama
no more drama
no more drama
gonna live you're life

so let her fly
and smile and laugh
like there is no tomomrow
don't give up
let her fly
so you can fly to
let her fly
I will tell you
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