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Started by Jasmine.m, February 19, 2010, 11:29:37 AM

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Jasmine.m

Hi. I have too much time on my hands today, so I wrote this haiku. I know it's probably not technically a haiku, but whatever!

Whose body is this?
The mirror must be lying!
I am so confused...

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Sandy

I sit quietly
I hear my soul cry softly
I must love myself

-Sandy
Out of the darkness, into the light.
Following my bliss.
I am complete...
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V M

Snuggle my pillows
Longing for someone to share
Fill this void with love
The main things to remember in life are Love, Kindness, Understanding and Respect - Always make forward progress

Superficial fanny kissing friends are a dime a dozen, a TRUE FRIEND however is PRICELESS


- V M
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FairyGirl

My body and soul
torn apart by chance at birth
at last will be whole
Girls rule, boys drool.
If I keep a green bough in my heart, then the singing bird will come.
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K8

After years of fear
Just throw caution to the wind
And be who you are.

- Kate
Life is a pilgrimage.
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Janet_Girl

So long in battle
The warrior grow tired
She longs to free her soul.
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V M

Whimper inside I
Give to all a laughing smile
The tears of a clown
The main things to remember in life are Love, Kindness, Understanding and Respect - Always make forward progress

Superficial fanny kissing friends are a dime a dozen, a TRUE FRIEND however is PRICELESS


- V M
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Bombi

will i ever be
the me
in my mind's eye
Yes there is really bigender people
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LordKAT

Am I misremembering what Haiku is? I thought it was 3 lines, the first with 5 syllables, then 7, then 5 again.
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Floating

I post haikus on twitter all the time! ^_^  I even got my master's thesis title in haiku form!

Here are some of the most recent trans related haiku that I posted on twitter.

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Time slips betwixt my
fingers. Everything I need;
further out of reach.

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We are the oceans.
Beachcombers know shallow shores,
not our deep fathoms.

The most intimate
seafarers, ride our currents,
know just our surface.

Only the drowning. 
Blessed, cursed, with the briefest glimpse
of our truest depths.

Swim away from us.
Swim in us. We pull them down.
We are the oceans.

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Self affirmation:
I am this and I am that.
Helpful? I don't know.

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Bright, sharp and hopeful
balance timid and worried.
I feel like yellow.
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K8

Looking down I see
Something that is just not right.
That should not be there!


- Kate
Life is a pilgrimage.
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FairyGirl

We forget the pain
of the life that was before,
and greet the new day.
Girls rule, boys drool.
If I keep a green bough in my heart, then the singing bird will come.
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AmySmiles

Wandering so long
Unable to find myself
The fog is lifting
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K8

Decades of hiding,
At last the cage door opens
And I can be me.


- Kate
Life is a pilgrimage.
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casorce

I hold it gleaming
Glinting like dew on wet grass
Brand new jewellery!
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Sandy

Quote from: LordKAT on April 08, 2010, 11:05:25 AM
Am I misremembering what Haiku is? I thought it was 3 lines, the first with 5 syllables, then 7, then 5 again.

You have it right, Kat, 5-7-5.

Kat is now at peace
She has now found her freedom
The pain has now left

-Sandy
Out of the darkness, into the light.
Following my bliss.
I am complete...
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Sandy

Sandy's Haiku:

A thought came to mind,
But what if you are a girl?
My journey began!
Out of the darkness, into the light.
Following my bliss.
I am complete...
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Kay Henderson

When I say "haiku",
do not reply "Gesundheit!".
It is not a sneeze.
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Jasmine.m

gaining confidence
it's getting harder to hide
who I truly am
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Martin

I hope I am not
intruding on a girls-only
thread, but this is cool.

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Long years looking at
distorted fun-house mirrors
I understand now.
"You measure democracy by the freedom it gives its dissidents, not the freedom it gives its assimilated conformists."
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