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Consciousness - looking for critiques

Started by Z, October 04, 2010, 03:03:31 AM

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Consciousness

> A story about an awkward, stubborn teenage boy named Ben and his--at first hesitant--friendship with an optimistic peer named Cayden. I really have no idea how to label the genre of the story without spoiling too much, but it kind of turns out to be.... thriller/drama/romance....possibly comedy--you know what, i won't even try.

> This is a story that i hope will be published someday, when i gain enough skills. Because right now, in my opinion, it's not very good at all considering the flow and storyline etc.
> But any comments and critiques are very much appreciated!

> The first chapter will start on the next post.
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