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Title: His Third Look
Post by: suzifrommd on May 05, 2015, 05:22:30 PM
Post by: suzifrommd on May 05, 2015, 05:22:30 PM
His Third Look
By Suzi Chase
May 4, 2015
https://www.susans.org/2015/05/04/third-look/
I had trouble understanding the third look. The first look was easy. It came shortly after Stan blocked his path.
It all started when Mitts saw the guy coming round the corner. The guy was weird. Had long silky hair, like he was a girl. Had a chest too. Wearing a bright pink scarf and hoop earrings, and from all that you'd think he was a she, but if you looked at his face, you could tell he was man. Don't know how, but something about that face was obviously male.
By Suzi Chase
May 4, 2015
https://www.susans.org/2015/05/04/third-look/
I had trouble understanding the third look. The first look was easy. It came shortly after Stan blocked his path.
It all started when Mitts saw the guy coming round the corner. The guy was weird. Had long silky hair, like he was a girl. Had a chest too. Wearing a bright pink scarf and hoop earrings, and from all that you'd think he was a she, but if you looked at his face, you could tell he was man. Don't know how, but something about that face was obviously male.
Title: Re: His Third Look
Post by: big kim on May 05, 2015, 05:45:04 PM
Post by: big kim on May 05, 2015, 05:45:04 PM
Brilliant,more please Suzi!
Title: Re: His Third Look
Post by: Jayne on May 05, 2015, 06:15:08 PM
Post by: Jayne on May 05, 2015, 06:15:08 PM
That's a great piece of writing, whoever inspired it must be quite a fantastic person ;)
Title: Re: His Third Look
Post by: Lady Smith on May 10, 2015, 11:38:42 PM
Post by: Lady Smith on May 10, 2015, 11:38:42 PM
Suzi, I was very much impressed by 'His Third look', what a great piece of writing.