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His Third Look

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His Third Look

By Suzi Chase
May 4, 2015

https://www.susans.org/2015/05/04/third-look/

I had trouble understanding the third look. The first look was easy. It came shortly after Stan blocked his path.

It all started when Mitts saw the guy coming round the corner. The guy was weird. Had long silky hair, like he was a girl. Had a chest too. Wearing a bright pink scarf and hoop earrings, and from all that you'd think he was a she, but if you looked at his face, you could tell he was man. Don't know how, but something about that face was obviously male.
Have you read my short story The Eve of Triumph?
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big kim

Brilliant,more please Suzi!
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Jayne

That's a great piece of writing, whoever inspired it must be quite a fantastic person  ;)
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Lady Smith

Suzi, I was very much impressed by 'His Third look', what a great piece of writing.
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