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Started by Jake_to_Jackie, May 20, 2007, 07:51:03 PM

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Jake_to_Jackie

Ok so first off i was only going shopping with 80 bucks. I was only able to get the breast fillers and a bag so that suck.
                    Lemme tell you bout a big step for me. Walking in to Victoria secret. As we came up to it all i noticed was how many people where at the mall. I had the Sarahs there to help me we walked in and it was crowded. I was nervous and  could not find the breast fillers. So we went up to the desk and stood there in line. I begged the Sarahs to ask for me. They where just as shy. I was about to run out of there but in the end i got a spurt of courage and asked. The lady saw it as absolute no big deal. She asked the other women. What went through my head was them yelling over the intercom. "Price check on bra fillers." Thank god they did not the clerk simply walked me over to them. showing me which ones worked best. Damn! 60$ a lil upsetting but i had to have them. After i bought them i found the makeup room. As i was over there (still with the sarahs) i over heard some lil kid say "make up is not for boys." I panicked. I think that one of the cosmetic girls noticed my embarrassment. Smileling she asked. "Can i help you with any thing." I answered "Yes do you have any blush or compact to match my completion." why did i ask that im going to get kicked out for being a freak but, she bared a friendly smile looked around and whispered to me. "Hunny go to wall-mart there cheaper. and just as good trust me." A smile and a wink wow she was not phased that i was a boy. It brought my confidence back i smiled back and walked out with my new breast fillers. Then went to hot topic the only thing i could afford was a messenger bag. Thats fine when I'm not dressed up that can be my purse. No one will say any thing cause boys wear them now a days. So the fact i only bought 2 things sucked. But i was able to do alot of window shopping. I saw what to get on my next paycheck. Got some complements i cant wait to take my new pics when Irwin gets here ill do them wait i look cute.

Your lil sister
Jackie

P.S. i had to go back and fix my grammar. Cause it seems i cant write a post with half the people complains of how i write it. And not what i say. Apparently its not what you say. But what is written that is important.
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Lori

Can you use a period every once in a while? That is the longest run-on sentence I have ever tried to read. Maybe you could break it into a couple of paragraphs as well. It's very difficult to read what you write. I ran out of breath half way through it and gave up.
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Jillieann Rose

I'm proud of Jackie. You did it.
Going in to Victoria Secret in guy mode and walking out with breast fillers.
Asking for help, oh wow that's great.
Way to go girl. Oh I had no problems reading what you worte and I was so excited for you.
Your doing just fine girl.
:)
Hugs,
Jillieann
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Jake_to_Jackie

 :icon_sleep: thanks Jillieann not much to say too tired ill put the new pics up tomorrow  :icon_sleep:

wish any of you could be here to cuddle with tonight
Jackie
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Lori

Thank you, much easier to read now   ;)
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Jillieann Rose

Hi Jackie,
I really don't think people should criticize your writing.
It is what you say that is important not how you say it.
Yes I know that good grammar is easier to read.
But I'm really sorry if you were hurt by people complaining about how you write.
I would have left Susan's if people had did that to me when I first came here.
So I'm glad your still here with us.
Hang in there Jackie.
Hugs,
Jillieann
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Jake_to_Jackie

awww jilly your so sweet.  :icon_bumdance-nerd: Thanks but no I'm ok just got a lil bothered by it. I hardly ever get realy mad less someone rag on me too too much. I'm not a violent girl


But in a follow up from my first post a teacher gave me a 20 dollar gift certificate to target. And the school is giving every senior 190 dollars for graduation. I cant wait to spend it this time it might go a wee bit better. now i know what Kristi meant when she said she felt like Betty and Wilma in that episode of the Flintstones. ^_^
CHARGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




Love your angel
Jackie  :angel:
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Dennis

Definitely the last post, with white space between ideas and stuff is easier to read, but nobody should be calling others down on grammar. I think the original post by Lori was just as a helpful hint, Jackie (although perhaps not put as gently as one could). I'm glad you take it that way :)

Whatever anyone does with grammar or spelling, it's the white space that makes it easier to read than a big block of text. I learned that when I was doing resumes.

Dennis
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robinhayes

Quote from: Jake_to_Jackie on May 20, 2007, 07:51:03 PM
Ok so first off i was only going shopping with 80 bucks. I was only able to get the breast fillers and a bag so that suck.

This can be an expensive endeavor!  Start slow, and build as you go.

Quote from: Jake_to_Jackie on May 20, 2007, 07:51:03 PM
                    Lemme tell you bout a big step for me. Walking in to Victoria secret. As we came up to it all i noticed was how many people where at the mall. I had the Sarahs there to help me we walked in and it was crowded. I was nervous and  could not find the breast fillers. So we went up to the desk and stood there in line. I begged the Sarahs to ask for me. They where just as shy. I was about to run out of there but in the end i got a spurt of courage and asked. The lady saw it as absolute no big deal. She asked the other women. What went through my head was them yelling over the intercom. "Price check on bra fillers." Thank god they did not the clerk simply walked me over to them. showing me which ones worked best. Damn! 60$ a lil upsetting but i had to have them.

You go, girl!  I know how nerve-racking that can be, and the thought of the loud-speaker can pour cold water down your back.  But you did it!!!

Quote from: Jake_to_Jackie on May 20, 2007, 07:51:03 PM
P.S. i had to go back and fix my grammar. Cause it seems i cant write a post with half the people complains of how i write it. And not what i say. Apparently its not what you say. But what is written that is important.

Some people inevitably nit-pick about presentation.  To be fair, ideas always come across better when they're presented well.  But as long as you get your point across, then communication has happened, and the goal has been met.  Besides, (no offense -- I'm guessing) if you're a non-native speaker, then you get extra grace for grammar and spelling...  As long as you offer me the same kindness when I'm trying to write in French!

Regards!
Robin
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