It's well-intentioned, but -- this is a manifesto that was written by a committee, and one composed of
very young people. It's
so important that no one's needs get left out when you're being activists together...

This is so charmingly post-modern as to be incomprehensible:
"In doing so, the essence of actual diverse experiences, epistemologies and intellectual productions are consistently devalued and/or erased. In this setting, specific incidents and multiple climates of racism, homophobia, ableism, and classism are ignored or denied."I think there's a way to write that in English, but it's hard to be sure.
And I love the progression from diverse epistemologies and whatnot to the decor of the meditation room:
"The decor shall be approved by a committee of students, staff, and faculty who embody multiple religious and spiritual beliefs to ensure that these rooms are as respectful and encompassing as possible."I like the idea of a respectful room (Bow down, draperies, bow down!), but I never want to live anywhere that has multiple climates. It's hard enough coping with the one I'm in.