From the last two pics I can definately see an improvement!
I think you are still too early on your transition. Wait for HRT to work a bit more while your hair grows and I am sure that after some time you'll start getting misgendered while trying to present on male mode

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What I can say (please, I mean no offense) is that you would benefit a bit from a small weight gain! Unfortunately your arms and hands are still too skinny and showing some veins (what is a big giveaway as cis women usually don't have visible veins on their arms and hands). But HRT will also help with that, increasing the amount of fat beneath your skin. Also, gaining weight while on HRT would help you gaining fat on more female regions, like tighs and butt!!
I also would suggest a diferent set of clothes... of course you can wear whatever you want, but most cis women out there wear more discrete clothes... think about "everyday casual wear"...clothes that doesn't show too much skin and that doesn't get too much attention while on public.
Hmmm and your make-up on the third pic is also standing out too much. Most cis women don't wear too much make-up, only if they are going out for a dinner or a night party and even though make-up is usually more discrete... the problem about wearing too much make-up with exotic colors is that you'll be getting more attention than you should... and it can resemble "drag make-up", what you should avoid at all costs.
Again, I've meant no offense. I just think that the best way to pass as a woman is to wear the most discrete clothes and make-up possible. You want to mix with the crowd, not stand out. I am sure that with time you'll learn what clothes suits better your body and your physical type. Also, wait a few more months...one year of HRT can make miracles and your natural hair wll be much longer, so you can style it on a more feminine way!

By the way... do you play World of Warcraft? Your name got my attention... so, I shall end this comment with "Suffer well, friend", wishes from a former human death knight that used to play WoW a lot.