Yeah, but if they sent it to me and said 'tekla, could you make this a little vaguer?' I'd have a hell of a hard time doing it. It's a world class example of using weasel words.
And, its not the platform yet, it has to be voted on, but I imagine that will be pretty much pro forma, I don't think there has been a platform fight since '72.
So I think it was written to toss a bone, but not enough to be used in a McCain ad.
And remember its all nothing but a waste of paper if Obama does not win, and does not pull the down ticket with him in huge numbers. And ignore the polls, its all about 5-7 states, Ohio, Penn, Minn, Wisconsin, Iowa and Mich and maybe Oregon depending on how the others go. The other states are more or less set, Cali and NY are not going red, Texas and Utah are not going Blue.