Dear (landlords name),
I have previously notified you ( how many times) of the following problems with unit### [/b]on the [/b] (when). The following photographs show that these issues have not been resolved.
Therefore I am withholding payment of rent until these issues are corrected.
Sincerely,
Your Name Here.
PS I have opened a bank account at ##### Bank. At said bank I have deposited this months rent and will make said payment AFTER these issues are resolved.
ATTACHED... You will find a photocopy of the above mentioned deposit, and photographs.
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That's just the changes i'll make.