Jessica.
That was really good.
I know you haven't asked but I'm gonna offer some constructive criticism. Mainly because I think you have something here.
Great material. Introducing yourself, at the start as a man was an excellent move. It set the tone and removed any possible doubts. Doubts just make the audience feel stupid and as any performer knows, never insult the audience.
Appearance. Your costume was entirely appropriate. Not over the top which would have been too silly. Your movements were good. Perhaps a little more, natural, movements, to keep interest. Not slapstick or clowning. That would be making fun of yourself visually. Not your style.
Delivery. Your were a bit hesitating at times, even slow. I've seen standups doing this type of act, (not transgendered), when they reach a pause or a thinking gap, they fill it with something, 'So I said to my mom, and you know what moms are like, I said, ........
Fills the gap, engages the audience.
When recounting conversations, for example, you could try to put on some of your personalities for example. You're good at that. The warm, extended Hi! Think of the stereo typed mom, the Jewish mom, the critical mom, the warm, encouraging mom, the confused mom. A different personality for different people. The supportive wife, the nagging wife, the busy wife, the loving wife.
Another prop, perhaps a bag of shopping, or a brown paper package the size of a shoe box. You just put it down, Don't mention it, it's just there as an attention grabber.
Anyway. I really enjoyed that video. I really think you've got something.
Hope you don't mind the comments.
