Quote from: Charlotte Kitty on Today at 01:00:41 PMWell here is my first attempt at recording my vocals properly, bringing them into my project and adding some femcore style pitch up and distortion.
This is certainly taking some learning.
Styles my weapon 🔗 [Link: drive.google.com/file/d/15eLxAx76ElJGxCJ4gwg19dbgfouxc-UG/view/]
That sounds good! I think you are dangerously close to your goal.
Just my opinion, as I have no expertise here, but the lyrics sound like you are rattling off a list of words rather than speaking a sentence. I think it is because you are ending the line with what sounds like a definite stop. Maybe that's intended.
I would try varying the inflection of the last word of each line. Think of a question mark instead of a period. Not every line, you want to vary the inflection with the meaning of the sentence, obviously. Women modulate their voices quite a bit while speaking. You have the pitch and resonance sounding good. Maintain that, but work on modulation. Think of the difference between how these sentences would sound:
I went to the shop.
I went to the shop?
I went to the shop!
I went to the shop, ...
I think if you just add a touch of variation to it, you will nail it. Good work! You have come a long way in a short time.