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Two friends; one heart and soul

Started by joanna, July 04, 2005, 07:35:12 PM

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joanna

Friends are important in our lives.  Sometimes the ones we have we don't always fully appreciate.  But I have one very close friend who will always have a special place in my heart.

My very special friend

I have a very special friend who is always near by.
She is there to comfort me when life makes me cry.

She never goes far, I reach out and she's there,
To hug me and tell me that she'll always care.

She understands so completely, no need to explain,
And when I am hurting, she feels my pain.

Without her my life would be empty and lost.
Of all my friends, I need her the most.

How she chose me, I can't understand.
Somewhere there must be a beautiful plan.

For with her in my life, I will never be alone.
She is the most beautiful person I have ever known.

I love her sweet smile and soft tender touch.
She fills my life with joy, I need her so much.

Sometimes it seems we share the same body and soul.
And without her, my life could never be whole.

Then I hear her voice like an angel as she speaks softly to me.
"I'm the girl inside you and I shall always be

your friend and companion.  So please don't forget
to let me live and be free and you'll never regret,

that I chose you as my very special friend.
And our lives will be happy to the bitter-sweet end."


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beth

you poem is so very beautiful joanna. Thank you for posting it. :)

the way you explain yourself is wonderful. loving yourself is so important. it seems many of us just find things to hate about ourselves.

i hope you write and post more poetry when you can joanna





beth
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4years

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stephanie_craxford

That is a beautiful poem Joanna.  I must admit that I don't very often read poetry, but yours is easy to read and understand.  There is no doubt that this person is trully a Special friend to you.  May we ask who it is?
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4years

*softly nudges Stephanie*
Quote from: joanna on July 04, 2005, 07:35:12 PM
...
Then I hear her voice like an angel as she speaks softly to me.
"I'm the girl inside you and I shall always be

your friend and companion. So please don't forget
to let me live and be free and you'll never regret,

that I chose you as my very special friend.
And our lives will be happy to the bitter-sweet end."
...
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stephanie_craxford

duuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhh  :)

Another blond moment (It's ok I'm blond)  Now you see why I don't read poetry that often.  I guess it's too subtle for this old brain.
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Denise01

I do not read poetry often either but yours is supberb.

A real friend is one who stays with us through both good and bad times, and also in the time of need.

At tiimes we do not know who our real friends are until we really need them

Denise
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