Thanks for the feedback
Seras, you are sounding really good, there is a huge improvement from your first post to now.
Justaseq, same as with Seras, plus it sounds like you have gained about 20 - 30 hz in pitch
My speaking voice is normally kind of raspy, but even more so it is very nasally ( which drives me nuts, and is one of the main things I want to get rid of in my female voice ).
Jenpa, Here are the things that helped me out a lot with my voice. This is in no particular order and just what has helped me out.
Practicing the stuff from this page.
http://www.everythingspeech.com/articles/resonant-voice-therapy/Also from various other sites, and posts
Having a slight smile when you speak
Try to speak from the tip of your nose ( it sounds odd but kind of what you want to shoot for ) you will feel the vibrations shift from your chest to to the roof of your moth and the front of your mouth.
Trying to keep your mouth a bit open as you speak
Adding breathiness to your speaking
Adding a bit of sing song when you speak, and not speaking in monotone, and ending sentences with a slight uplift in pitch.
Record yourself and keep recordings and notes so you know what you did to get the results. I started 2 months ago and I was getting really discouraged with my voice until I listened to my first recoding and the recordings from a month ago and saw how much improvement had taken place.
Practice ( of course )
Lastly - DO not overtax your voice, take it easy to start and work your way up, take a sip of water in between reading or practicing, do not let the vocal cords dry out. When they start to get tired or sore take a break until they are better.