I apologise to be the bearer of bad news but I do not think your voice sounds all that much better. You are using the same mic and stuff? Your voice sounds a lot smaller, you need to be able to project I don't know if you can with the means by which you are attempting to feminise your voice. You also sound a lot more strained, you cannot be strained, speaking is meant to be easy. Of course you can sometimes resolve that with practice but not always, depending on a few things.
Don't be discouraged though. Voice is hard work. I worked mine by myself for over a year before going to a voice therapist and I still don't think I am there.