Yep, I think the smile is too strained, you might need to go lighter on the makeup (but it can still look good) and if you can figure out how to shape your eyebrows a bit, that might help

But yes, you do pass and you even look pretty, whether you will believe it or not

You might be able to still see the guy hidden in there, but seriously, look at most cis women and imagine that they were trans women and had transitioned. You could see the "guy" in them, too (though not all of them, but that is also true for a few of us, too).