Poem 9: Autumn

[YinYanga]

~Autumn

With a smirk she tangles
Not allowing me to sleep
Scared yet captivated
Through all the reeling
I'm caught in a sweep
Tumbling, shivering
Just stay and hold me
As all odds are in the air
A cramping gasp
Unruly hair

[Mark3]

Very good.!

Its thought provoking and sparks the imagination.!

[YinYanga]

Thanks, I quite like this one too
Definately left me... satisfied. And in need of a cup of hot choc