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Poem 9: Autumn

Started by YinYanga, October 17, 2014, 06:58:42 AM

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YinYanga

October 17, 2014, 06:58:42 AM
~Autumn

With a smirk she tangles
Not allowing me to sleep
Scared yet captivated
Through all the reeling
I'm caught in a sweep
Tumbling, shivering
Just stay and hold me
As all odds are in the air
A cramping gasp
Unruly hair
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Mark3

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October 17, 2014, 10:09:06 AM
Very good.!

Its thought provoking and sparks the imagination.!
"The soul is beyond male and female as it is beyond life and death."
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YinYanga

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October 17, 2014, 11:27:50 AM

Thanks, I quite like this one too
Definately left me... satisfied. And in need of a cup of hot choc 😉
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