Home Demo Of A Song I wrote 8 months ago and keep adding to. I rerecorded it with a clean, strummed guitar part, a distorted part, programmed drums and vocals. The vocals marr what is otherwise a well-enough performed track, even if the guitar-only demo was more exciting. I not only could not decide on one vocal delivery, but also could not decide on certain lyrics. There's one part that's either sung from the part of just one guy or one guy and presumably his girlfriend with a few words changed. On one vocal take i didn't feel like doing the falsetto so i changed the words on the fly and on the other take the vocals are too inconsistent. Another verse i mumbled my way through and have yet to do a retake of. Also, the recording doesn't sound too good. It's listenable, but as a result of me not using line-in, the guitar sounds a bit distant at times. The intro solo works surprisingly well though.The drum part sounds too plodding. Have to change it, but not too much. It's not a happy song. It's no longer about anything though, come to think of it. The original meaning has partially been forgotten and invalidated by recent experiences with people.
